Point 1 for Sammy

Reason 276: First time I get feedback from an English paper and DON'T feel like the worst. FEELS GOOD! High fives all around. Yes to this. I like this. I could get used to this. Just a few quick fixes and edits. I can do that! It's sad how great this is for me. Oh well. Deal with it. Happy dance with me :)

As promised ^_^